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Moonsun on 25th Nov 2017, 12:00 PM

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Aouch this page is so bad I want to tear out my eyes...
Back when I was working on this chapter (and maybe the 2 next ones) I didn't really have an understanding of rythm in a story, I was afraid to be too slow or that I hadn't enough happening in one chapter and so you'll see everything will go really fast for a while.

If I redid the first 4 chapters now, they would probably take me 7-8 chapters.