30th Nov 2017, 12:19 AM

Chapter 3 - Mother
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Moonsun on 30th Nov 2017, 12:19 AM

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From now on, coloured illustrations are only at the beginning of a chapter but they still show what is happening with the "other side" :)



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30_Bouncyballs on 30th Nov 2017, 5:29 AM

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Well, uh... That's informative...

Good sense of suspense building, though, on that last chapter. I'm a little concerned for the character's well-being.

Hope they turn out alright.

Moonsun on 1st Dec 2017, 9:56 AM

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Hey I'm like any author. I want my characters to suffeeeeer